A fun time at poly fest

Why we went to the Polyfest!
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - Be creative - capture your audience’s attention!
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what our trip was for yesterday and purpose of post
I	Information - **Explain your highlights in a logical sequence **Explain why you think the Polyfest is important for students who participate, their whanau and community
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	A fun time at  polyfest trip !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Introduction	We left school at 9:00 And when we got there we sat down in our class lines We sang songs we then got up and went to stalls. Then we went back to where we last time and went to our groups.
Information 1st highlight	Watching people dance on the stage And looking how funky they were dancing crack up! A lot of people went up on stage and started dancing Which was pretty cool.
Information 2nd highlight	We then got to win prizes and we got a lot of other things We went to play a game and every one in my group won a prize. It was really a day we wished it never ended we had plenty of fun there We to go to this dance thing where u go swirl this thing around and was amazing...
Information 3rd Polyfest importance to students etc	My best part of the day is that i got picked to go up on the stage And I got to sing and i was so shy but then i just sang my best. There were a lot of other singers that were really amazing I new that they were really gooder  me but all my friends were screaming at me and cheering for and i was really trying my best.
Conclusion	We then got all together at 2:00 And we headed back to the bus and we then took 15 mins to get back to school and we went back to  the street  and we sang a song and then the bell rang. And we went back home...